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8 | 4 | 3 | substitute “that” for the words “the industry”. |
11 | last | 2 | insert “between” before “about”, and substitute “1933” for “1930”. |
12 | last | 1 & 2 | should read: “Certificates are also deducted for soldiers and soldiers’ wives. People who...” |
17 | last | 9 | delete the words “raw materials or”. |
21 | last | 7 | delete the word “for”, and alter “import”to “imported”. |
22 | | 1 | substitute “trade” for “balance”. |
22 | 3 | 4 | substitute “lag in” for “lack of”. |
22 | 3 | 5 & 6 | alter “patch” to “catch” in each instance. |
27 | 3 | 2 | delete the words "As we produce" and start sentence: "We have..." |
27 | 3 | 11 | substitute "A" for "that". |
27 | 3 | 12 | insert “coarse” before “sand”. |
28 | 1 | 4 | substitute the words “represents a transfer” for “is a transition”. |
28 | 1 | 8 | substitute “by” for “of” after the word “vessels”. |
28 | 1 | 17 | delete the words “the colony in”. |
28 | 1 | 18 & 19 | delete “capitalisation and financing of” and replace by “capital and finances for. |
28 | 1 | 21 | alter “increased” to “decreased”. |
28 | 1 | 22 | delete the words “particularly” and “are not”. |
28 | 1 | 23 | delete “alone, and”. |
28 | 1 | 27 | alter “their” to “the. |
29 | 4 | 13 | substitute “various” for “obvious”. |
29 | 4 | 14 | substitute “in” for “to” at end of line. |
29 | 6 | 3 | insert “many” before “products”. |
37 | 8 | should read: | Page 37 para. 8, should read: “Now the Yishuv…link, the present day link, in that...back to its national life; to that…” |
38 | 1 | 9 | insert "so that" before "it" at end of line. |
38 | 1 | 10 | substitute "casing" for "case". |
38 | 1 | 12 | insert "to be" before "considered". |
40 | 1 | 4 | substitute "vested" for "invested". |
40 | 1 | 6 | substitute "widest possible powers for "wide-open officials views". |
40 | 1 | 7 | substitute “exercised” for “prescribed”. |
40 | 3 | 4 | substitute “the land happens” for “they happen”. |
41 | 1 | 3 | alter “were forced” to “who joined”. |
42 | 1 | 3 | change "a" to "the" before "world". |
42 | 2 | 8 | change “it” to “us” after “against”. |
42 | 3 | 6 | delete “that issue” and substitute “the Yishuv”. |
42 | 1 | 6 | insert “the” before “desire”. |
42 | 1 | 14 | substitute “improved “ for “approved”. |
43 | 1 | 1 | alter “safeguard” to “safeguards”. |
44 | 4 | 6 | alter “5.95” to “5 to 95”. |
45 | 2 | 3 | substitute “30 for “30”. |
45 | 2 | 4 | change “90%” to “90.2%” |
45 | 4 | 1 | substitute “diagram” for “background”. |
47 | 2 | 5 | substitute “2.4” for “2.84”. |
47 | 3 | 2 | delete “percentage of medical facilities for out-patients” and substitute “great shortage of beds in our hospitals”. |
47 | 3 | 2 | delete the whole passage “It would be…missionary hospitals”. |
47 | 3 | 8 | substitute “many” for “some twenty”. |
47 | 3 | 9 | delete “and”. |
47 | 3 | 10 | delete “each”. |
47 | 3 | 11 | insert full-stop after "percent”, delete “51.6” and start following sentence thus: “This shortage of beds is a constant source...”. |
47 | 3 | 14 | should read “patients treated...of...can be seen from the diagram,…figures”. |
48 | 2 | 8 | should read “ago, possibly a result…” |
48 | 3 | 2 | delete the whole sentence “This is...Palestine”. |
48 | 3 | 3 | insert “that” after “you see”. |
48 | 3 | 5 & 6 | should read: “However, among 13 Government Senior Medical Officers, there are no Jews at all, and among 25 Medical Officers Grade I there are only 5 Jews”. |
48 | 4 | 9 | substitute “I would” for “It may be of interest to”. |
48 | 4 | 11 | substitute “hospital” for “hospitals”. |
49 | 2 | 1 | substitute “whereas it is” for “I think while the”. |
49 | 2 | 2 | delete “is” before the words “not to help”. |
49 | 2 | 11 | delete the word “rather”. |
51 | 3 | 4 | substitute “malaria areas” for “areas with malaria”. |
51 | 3 | 5 | should read “the blue...was, in 1920, 50-100 percent”. |
51 | 3 | 6 | insert ”also” before “malarial”. |
51 | 3 | 7 | delete “figure” and replace by “malaria rate”. |
51 | 4 | 1 | delete the words “on the same”. |
51 | 4 | 2 | substitute “From the brown spots” for “In the brown part”. |
51 | 4 | 4 | change “for” to “to” after the word “meant”. |
51 | 5 | 1 | substitute “anti-malaria work” for “malarial war”. |
51 | 5 | 3 | should read “This work started in 1922 with the”. |
51 | 5 | 4 | substitute “establishment” for “erection”. |
51 | 5 | 5 | substitute “some of the” for three”, and delete the words” not all the areas”. |
52 | 1 | 1 | delete “That is” and replace by “Even in”. |
52 | 1 | 2 | alter “claimed” to “reclaimed” and delete “and ameliorated”. |
52 | 2 | 1 | after the word “disease”, insert “trachoma”. |
52 | 2 | 3 | substitute “has dropped to” for “reaches”. |
52 | 2 | 7 | change “have” to “had”, delete “percent” after “80”, and insert a comma after “children”. |
52 | 2 | 8 | substitute “and is” for “It is”. |
52 | 3 | 1 | should read: “Here....in trachoma incidence, from which”, deleting the words “but it”. |
52 | 3 | 2 | substitute “it appears” for “seems”. |
52 | 4 | 2 | substitute “shows that” for “includes only typhoid and”. |
52 | 4 | 3 | insert “of the anti-typhoid measures” after “results”; delete “very” before “disappointing” and again at end of line. |
52 | 4 | 4 | delete the words “first of all”. |
52 | 4 | 5 | delete the words “we had no control”. |
52 | 4 | 7 | substitute “at a low ebb — and” for “almost limited — it”. |
52 | 4 | 9 | insert “mortality” after “typhoid”. |
53 | 1 | 1 | to begin “disease. For example, we tried…”. |
53 | 1 | 3 | substitute “outbreaks” for “the attacks”. |
53 | 2 | 15 | to read “one indicating the situation after World War I”. |
52 | 2 | 19 | delete "at present," after "Now". |
54 | 2 | 17 | substitute “the diagram shows that” for “I say”. |
55 | 2 | 5 | change “twenty” to “fifteen” and “had” to “has”. |
55 | 2 | 7 & 8 | “You can see...five”. |
55 | 4 | 3 | substitute “fifteen” for “twenty”. |
55 | 4 | 5 & 7 | should read: “..see the beneficial effect of Jewish settlement on Arab child mortality. In the purely ...the rate is much higher than in the ...of Jaffa and Haifa...”. |
55 | 5 | 9 | substitute “appropriate” for “approximate”. |
63 | 7 | 2 | change “drafted” to “redrafted”. |
64 | 1 | 5 | substitute “exclude” for “excuse”. |
65 | 3 | 2 | "In am" to read "I am". |
65 | 8 | 1 | substitute “enacted” for “registered”. |